[Requests] late comments for IndoorGML

junqiao.zhao zhaojunqiao at tongji.edu.cn
Mon Mar 31 10:51:44 EDT 2014


Part A to be completed once.  Iterate Part B as needed.

 

 

PART A

 

 

1. Evaluator:

        [Dr. Junqiao (John) Zhao 

Assistant Professor, Department of Computer Science and Technology

College of Electronics and Information Engineering, Tongji University

Email: zhaojunqiao at tongji.edu.cn]

 

2. Submission: [OGC 14-005, OGC IndoorGML]

 

 

PART B

1. Requirement: [General, #1] 

2. Implementation Specification Section number: [7.1.3]

3. Criticality: [Minor]

4. Comments/justifications for changes: [The title of this section may
should be revised as “Semantic representation of Indoor Space” in order to
keep consistency with the subsequent subsections]

 

PART B

1. Requirement: [General, #2] 

2. Implementation Specification Section number: [General, 7.1.5]

3. Criticality: [Major]

4. Comments/justifications for changes: [The mapping to dual space should
also discuss the lower dimensional objects, like curve and point in 3D
space]

 

PART B

1. Requirement: [General, #3] 

2. Implementation Specification Section number: [General, 7.2]

3. Criticality: [Major]

4. Comments/justifications for changes: [The description of structured space
model can be directly merged into the MLSM section. ]

 

PART B

1. Requirement: [General, #4] 

2. Implementation Specification Section number: [General, 7.2]

3. Criticality: [Minor]

4. Comments/justifications for changes: [ “Figure 10” in line 5 should be
revised to “figure 9”.  “The lower part” in line6 should be revised to
“the right part”]

 

PART B

1. Requirement: [General, #5] 

2. Implementation Specification Section number: [General, 7.2]

3. Criticality: [Major]

4. Comments/justifications for changes: [The terminology of “state” and
“transition” is suggested to reconsidered. Two concepts can be represented
by using more general terms like “node”, “link”]

 

PART B

1. Requirement: [General, #6] 

2. Implementation Specification Section number: [General, 7.2]

3. Criticality: [Major]

4. Comments/justifications for changes: [The dual space does not need a
geometric realization, because it is made up by logical relations.]

 

PART B

1. Requirement: [General, #7] 

2. Implementation Specification Section number: [General, 7.3.2]

3. Criticality: [Minor]

4. Comments/justifications for changes: [ “Figure 10” in line 2 should be
revised to “figure 11”. ]

 

PART B

1. Requirement: [General, #8] 

2. Implementation Specification Section number: [General, 7.3.2]

3. Criticality: [Minor]

4. Comments/justifications for changes: [ The new font in the last but 10
line should be revised to keep consistency. ]

 

Best regards,

 

John

 

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赵君峤

Junqiao (John) Zhao Ph.D.

 

Assistant Professor, Department of Computer Science and Technology

College of Electronics and Information Engineering, Tongji University

Telecom Building, 4800 Cao'an Road, Jiading 

201804 Shanghai, China

 

Tel: +86 139 1807 8560
Email: zhaojunqiao at tongji.edu.cn|johnzjq at gmail.com

 

 

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