[Requests] GeoDRM (RFPC 30) Response

Rob Farrell rob_farrell at ncsu.edu
Tue Apr 4 16:06:42 EDT 2006


These are all very minor edits, but I figured someone should mention them.

PART A

Evaluator:  Rob Farrell, North Carolina State University Libraries, 
rob_farrell at ncsu.edu
Submission:  OGC 06-004r3, GeoDRM RM

PART B
Section: 7.9, first word on page 45 should be "effects", not "affects"
Criticality: Minor
Comments:

PART B
Section: 7.9, page 45 second bullet, last word, first line should be 
"the", not "ther"
Criticality: Minor
Comments:

PART B
Section: 8.1, Figure 12, "Establis Credentials" should be "Establish 
Credentials"
Criticality: Minor
Comments:

PART B
Section: 8.3, "legal owners presence" should be "legal owner's presence"
Criticality: Minor
Comments:

PART B
Section:  9.1, para 4, "Once striped" should be "Once stripped"
Criticality: Minor
Comments:

PART B
Section: 9.1, last sentence of section 9.1 on page 53 needs a "."
Criticality: Minor
Comments:

PART B
Section: 9.5.3.2.1, first line on page 56, "...between legal system..." 
should be "...between legal systems..."
Criticality: Minor
Comments:

PART B
Section: 9.5.3.2.4.3, "All input resource..." should be "All input 
resources..."
Criticality: Minor
Comments:

PART B
Section: 9.5.3.2.4.9, "...that correspond the..." should be "...that 
correspond to the..."
Criticality: Minor
Comments:



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